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PostSubject: Re: Adol Album   Sun Mar 09, 2014 2:02 pm

Zou, I would like you to clarify, is this to be a new first year, or are you putting in a character as a villian?

Also, I would prefer some more details in fighting style, it's just too little in my opinion.

As well as some more details OF the weapons in their descriptions. We get how they work, but what do they look like? Colors, designs?

Please get back to me with your answer and edits.

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PostSubject: Re: Adol Album   Sun Mar 09, 2014 2:28 pm

Okay, due to some issues, I deleted post, and here it is again.

Character Info

Name:
Adol Album

Gender:
Male

Race:
Human

Age:
17

Personality:
Adol is outwardly charming, charismatic, and nice to others. He usually knows just what to say to get his point across. He appears to care for everyone, and will avoid the use of slander and/or aggression to get his way.

Inwardly, however, he cares not for anyone. His charisma and kind words are a means to an end, for him. People are naught but resources to tap whenever he feels so inclined.

Adol is rather confidant in his abilities, almost to the point of arrogance.
He's a good tactician, and a strong leader.

Despite this superiority complex he seems to have, Adol DOES know when it behooves him to bow down to others, and will certainly do so, if it suits him well.

Appearance:
Adol has long, white hair, that come down past his shoulders.
He stands at 6'4", and is on the muscular side. Not a beefcake, but one could definitely see them, where they so inclined to look.
He has slightly feminine features, yet is not so effeminate as to be confused with a woman.
His eyes are electric-blue, and can wilt a flower with a stare just as well as they can sparkle with joy.

Representation:
The White Rabbit.

Color:
White {"Album" is Latin for "White"}

Semblance:
Suggestion;
Adol's Semblance works well with his charisma. His Semblance can make his words sound ever so slightly more compelling. They can make the things he says easier to believe, and the orders he gives sound like better ideas.
It will not make a person believe every word, or follow every order, but more just give them a sense that he knows what he's talking about.
For example, where he to tell you "Air is poisonous, you shouldn't breath" while using Suggestion, one wouldn't just take his word for it and stop breathing. They would still maintain that this is incorrect, however, they may get the nagging suspicion that perhaps the air around here does contain more pollutants than elsewhere.

Emblem:
I'll probably get around to making one, but I'm no designer, so I'll need to wait for inspiration on that front.

Bio:
Adol comes from a small town known as Thistledown.
He never really had any troubles. He was popular in school. He got top grades. Liked by most, but disliked by none.
He had naturally good looks, and usually could talk people into helping him with just about anything.
He had gotten to know everyone in town, to a degree (Not exactly hard, considering Thistledown was a fairly small town.), and knew how to play to everyone's personality. However, there was one kid in town that never really interacted with anyone. A shut-in called "Shard". While Adol had grown a sort of superiority complex due to his situation, Shard remained the one person who could consistently defy his expectations. Adol could find no way to entice Shard to leave the house.
All of it became irrelevant, however, when Thistledown was raided by bandits.
A few people where kidnapped, and among them, Shard.
Overall, this meant nothing to Adol, as to him, Shard was just one more puzzle to be solved.

Fast forward a few years, and Adol had experienced a good life at the young age of 15. Blessed with fortune so far. And yet, it all felt empty, meaningless.

It felt to him as though everything he had accomplished was nothing more than was expected of him.
He looked back, and thought on his current situation, and came to the realization that, for all intents and purposes, he had the entire town in the palm of his hand.
He had an entire town, practically! And it still wasn't enough.
"And so" he thought, "If I'm not sated with one town, I should then try to 'obtain' another."
And so Adol left Thistledown, on a quest to sate his greed.

Equipment and Battle Info

Battle attire:
Adol wears a full suit of steel armor. Intricate patterns are carved on the chest piece, but worn a little from continued use.
His casual clothes are simply a dark blue shirt, and jeans.

Fighting style:
Adol is a master at swordplay, and has a great aim with a crossbow. His goal in battle is to beat the enemy, at any cost but his own life.
He'd prefer to remain at a distance with the Chaser, but if he has to use the Rabbit for offence, he'll do so.
He fights dirty in close combat, distracting with the Chaser to get a shot in with the Rabbit, and feinting with the Rabbit so as to let a bolt fly easier with the Chaser.

Weapon 1 Name:
The Rabbit

Weapon 1 Range:
Short

Weapon 1 type:
A cutlass.

Weapon 1 Description:
The Rabbit is a plain old cutlass, infused with Shock Dust. Aside from that, there really isn't anything remarkable about it.
The blade is silver, and has a slight bluish sheen from the Dust. The handle has a small rabbit carved into it, and the crossbar takes the shape of rabbit ears.
It's named "The Rabbit", as Adol will use it as self defense more often than attack.

Weapon 2 Name:
The Chaser

Weapon 2 Range:
Long, Medium.

Weapon 2 type:
A one handed crossbow.

Weapon 2 Description:
The Chaser is a crossbow that has been modified to only require a single hand to use.
It has a mechanism in it so that when it fires, the sight will flip, and have another bolt loaded.
Aside from this, the crossbow itself is rather unremarkable.
The bolts, however, are a different story.
Adol has several kinds he uses;
A bolt infused with Burn Dust
A bolt infused with Shock Dust
A bolt infused with Ice Dust
And lastly, a bolt tipped with strong sedatives.

Sorry, I really can't think of how to describe its appearance, but I picture it like this;
Chaser:
 

Misc. Info

Family:
Adol has a family, but they are as irrelevant to him as anyone else.

Strengths and Weaknesses:
Adol is a great tactician, a smart individual, and is rather strong. He is an exceptional speaker, and a charming fellow
However, his superiority complex gives him the tendency to underestimate others. This is not something that is fixed through a battle, either.
Other:
Adol can be rather obsessed with people if they exceed his expectations of them. If this were to happen, Adol may become unhealthily focused on that person. (Not in a romantic sense, however)
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PostSubject: Re: Adol Album   Sun Mar 09, 2014 2:29 pm

Double post, because issues.

Moon, edited the stuff.
And Adol is supposed to be a villain, yeah.

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PostSubject: Re: Adol Album   Sun Mar 09, 2014 2:38 pm

Alright, that's better and thank you for clarifying what he was, makes it easier to understand his age.

Anyway, I see no other problems.

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PostSubject: Re: Adol Album   Wed Mar 12, 2014 4:28 pm

Looks all good to me.

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