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PostSubject: Aoichi Enma   Tue Mar 04, 2014 3:58 am

Name: Aoichi Enma

Gender:  Female

Race:  Human

Age: 18

Personality: Quiet and focused, will most likely not interact while she is studying or training. She takes her training and schooling very, very seriously. So seriously that if someone was to get in her way, she will hit them.

Appearance:
• Physical appearance: Thin and slender body but has hidden muscles that wouldn’t be noticed at first glance.
• Height and Weight: She stands about 5’7 and weighs about 130-140 pounds (Though some of the weight comes from her 36 DD size breasts.
• Hair and Eyes: Her midnight black hair goes in a pony-tail that goes to the neck. She have a blue and red eye with a ring of opposite color in them meaning that in Ai’s left eye is blue, but has a red ring around the pupil and in her right eye is red with a blue ring.
• Skin tone: Aoi’s skin is a light shade of pale, meaning that it’s a lighter shade of normal skin.
• Flaw: Has a small ‘nick’ on the right side of her cheek. It is hardly noticeable unless light hits it on the right angle.

Representation: Spartacus

Color: Blue

Semblance:
• Battle Sight: Will allow her to see what her opponent(s) will do before they do it. It goes only for a few seconds. How it works is that the enemy will be red, while their attack (As if swinging) will be played out ‘frame by frame’ in blue.
• Short Terms: When she is doing Battle Sight for short bursts of time, she can able to do it up to 5-7 times in a single battle.

  • Downside: Though whenever Aoichi uses the semblance, she must be force to let her eyes 'cool down'.

 

Emblem: Two swords in a ‘X’ fashion over a shield. (May change.)

Bio: Aoichi, at age six, was a girl that wasn’t ‘average’ or ‘normal’ for she was a girl that was raised by an unknown and hidden organization where she is supposed to be trained to become a ‘perfect solder’ where she wouldn’t just overcome the situation. But to thrive the situation with flying colors. Aoichi was trained to not be dangerous with just weapons, but to make herself a weapon too.  Her life was meant to be scheduled and monitored at all times. Not one moment where Aoichi would be alone by herself. For if They were to find out that Aoichi would be ‘slacking off’ off schedule when she is supposed to be training or other, then there would be, for a lack of better words, hell to pay. But it’s better to be safe than sorry and watch the six year old girl. Since Aoichi is still young, she is taught more than the physical exercise since there isn’t much a six year old can do. But that doesn’t mean that They weren’t going to train the slack out of her. To rid of all the ignorance and stupidity out of her and remake her into their own image. But that doesn’t mean that Aoichi stays inside all day. She will be trained. That is absolute. The scheduled was as followed

• Sleeping: 8
• Being taught (School): 4
• Break and Expression: 4
• Training: 4
• Fighting: 4

As the six year old was being trained constantly, if there was something that she struggled with or doesn’t understand, They will drill it over and over until not only she gets it, but does it flawlessly. Failure isn’t accepted. They had taught her to not give up, even if she was in a tough situation, she is to complete the mission with no questions asked. They already told her this and made it into her psyche.

What Aoichi is being taught is about what regular classes taught, it was important to learn the basics so it would be easier for what she was meant for in the future. Plus They wouldn’t allow her to be uneducated. But normal schooling wasn’t the only thing that They were teaching her as it was also teaching her about the human body and everything that was inside of it. Going over each and every part of the body to the last, detail of the human body. To be sure that she understood the parts of the body and the functions of it.

The ‘Break’ in her scheduled is for her to relax and stretch for what she is about to do in the next part of the schedule. She is to train and prepare herself mentally and physically with a side training of facial and body expression. This is to help make her to fake emotions and be a better actor. Sometimes, she’ll be ordered to be in one specific emotion and to make sure that she had it right in the situation. If she was to make people too actually to believe that she was ‘upset’, ‘sad’, or any other emotion made it better for Aoichi.

The ‘Training’ portion of her life was to be sure that she could protect herself and that she had the basics of fighting. Because of her age, she was only taught hand to hand combat and CQC (Close Quarter Combat), how to disarm weapons, and learning about the weapons and terms of the weapons.

The ‘Fighting’ part is to test Aoichi and to make sure that she remembered the training and to make sure that it would be memorized incase if it wasn’t part of the routine or outside of the practice zone. So she is trained by how fast she can do it, how effective she can make it, and how it will play out. If she was to get three ‘No’ by not meeting the requirements or if the trainers thought that the performance was ‘sloppy’, then they would force her to redo it and made sure that it was both ‘acceptable’ and ‘flawless’. Anything less was unacceptable. No excuses around it.
As time passed, Aoichi Enma was slowly being given the use of certain weapons. Small, easy to conceal weapons like a small knife. In fact, the organization a standard knife that had a black handle and a blade that had an average length of blade. Aoichi was amazed that she could take outside of the training room. She was amazed by it as she never really had a close look of it as she was mostly told with it from a distance and was only taught how to handle and disarm them. Not for her to have and hold. So it made things a bit interesting for her as she could practice on her own. So for some time, she carried it with her wherever she went. She kept it in the sheath at times, or looking at it, taking in the details and craftsmanship. Aoichi didn’t try to show off while doing the techniques as she practiced since there was no point to it as she just had to do it ‘as fast as possible’.

Aoi, now at age eight, was now learn with the basics of combat and how to arm herself if she needed it. They were confident that that Aoichi wouldn’t reveal any information if she was to be taken by enemy forces. But luckily, it was just a simple assassination mission with a sniper gun. Nothing to hard to worry about. When the black hair girl had taken her position to take care of the person that she was told, she waited until being given the order to pull the trigger. Not to early, not too late. But when they told her to. She took in the man’s appearance as she waited. How tall he look, how fat he was, and how he spoke.

‘Now’

‘Bang!’

And then, the guy was dead. The eight year old girl quickly packed up the stuff that she used for the mission and left the rooftop. When she came back to the base, she didn’t hesitate or think twice about who that guy was or why she needed to kill him. She didn’t want to know because in actuality, she didn’t care about who he was. To her, the guy was just a ‘faceless nobody’. And she knew, that if she was caught by the enemy, They would abandon her and say nothing to save her.

She knew her role well, and understood the consequences should she failed.

After the assassination of the man, she wasn’t even fazed by it since she was trained not to react to such petty things. And she knew what would happen as They explained it to her before she went onto the mission three hours ago. Along with how the guy would dress like and act. Everything was explained down to the last detail. Even if it didn’t seem important. They wanted to make sure that Aoichi Enma had a solid, crystal clear image in her head. To make sure there was no mistakes.

Now at age twelve, Aoichi Enma was now a ‘prodigy’ with their work. Had flawless missions and task. Not one mistake to be had by her, but she didn’t boast about it, didn’t brag about it, not even spoke of it.  She even refused some parties to celebrate her success as it was a ‘Not part of her schedule’ and went to her room or training hall.

Now, at her current age, she devoted her life to train and missions. Nothing else. She wanted to be what they wanted of her. But though, it seem like she wasn’t being challenged enough as she wanted to improve more then her current ability. To speed up the process of being ‘perfect’. That was, until she heard someone talking about their kids being enrolled into Beacon. She thought that it would be a good experience for her.

Something that would give her a challenge since the missions that she went on didn't seem to give her enough of a challenge when she was first growing up. So slightly because of the idea of going to Beacon was simply because she was bored. So, she requested to be enrolled into Beacon, though, with a history of course. And so, she went to Beacon, with her history being that she was a transfer from another school.

[10:15:55] @ Wei Tzu : Don't give up on it, Vamp..
[10:16:28] @ moonlitneko : you can do it Vamp!

Equipment and Battle Info

Battle attire: http://static3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20121116194645/dynastywarriors/images/b/bd/Luxun-dw7art.jpg

She wears a white 'undershirt' type of shirt that is actually enforced with slight armor inside of the shirt to protect Aoichi from slight damages. It can't be enforced too much or else it would be heavy and would make people wonder why her 'undershirt' is so heavy. Its sleeves goes out to the wrists and past the pants line a bit. But only a bit.

She wears the red 'tunic-like' shirt is now enforced more then the 'Undershirt' since it's on the outside and has a reason to be enforced. It is mostly red with golden designs (Much to Aoichi's dislike.) on the 'Tunic'. It is sleeveless and goes almost to the ankles. It works by being tied on the front leftish side of the tunic. The top half, which covers the body, is tight. The lower half is more looser and less binding. On the lower half, it actually splits into two as it will make it easier to move around. And throughout the tunic, there are hidden pockets.

The pants are matching with the tunic but with gold on the belt. They are for her size and has a 'tight but comfortable' feel on it.

The boots are a darker red of the outfit that goes up to the knees. These have pockets for knives and very, very thin string. But it is not known as people don't normally look at her feet. The pocket on the left has her childhood knife that was given when she was young.

Fighting style: Fast and fluent. A type that will be able to fight alone even if the odds are against her, but she will wait, and dodge and/or deflect, until she understands the patterns of the enemy’s attack. She will often plan out her attacks before taking action.

Weapon Name: Kokkai

Weapon Range: Her weapon is close combat and mid-distance

Weapon type: A Sword and Crossbow

Weapon Description:
• The design of the Sword: http://www.deviantart.com/art/Xargas-Snake-Swords-by-Gargant-78550027


  • The Blade: The Edges Blade is a light tint of blue, almost a 'Aero Blue' shade of blue. But only on the edges. Nothing else. On the flat side of the sword is black, but it doesn't cover the entire flat area of the sword, only the outer part of the blade. On the 'inside' of the blade, of the black area, is silver. And as it goes down the blade, it has 'bars' like markings going down the blade, but before the hilt. And more 'bars' going across the main bar that goes down it.



  • The Handle: Where the part where Aoichi holds it is the same style of 'silver' that decorates most of the blade. The hilt (or the thing that part is called) is actually the same 'black' that goes on the outer side of the blade that continues down to the hilt.


• Extra design: On the sides (Where the side of the blade is facing up. Picture it as a top down view) There is a small indent where the bolt goes and becomes a secondary weapon of a crossbow. With the top ‘arm’ acts as accuracy for it is called a ‘sight’ that helps fires the bolt accurately within short to mid-range distances. The bottom ‘arm’ acts as the trigger that fires the bolt. Mid-range going to 60m

Weapon Abilities: (Unique abilities of the weapon in question.) The crossbow can be, accurately shot, fired at 60-80m. But at 80m, it will possibly lose the effectiveness.

Misc. Info
 
Family: (Any family being used or too be used in the RP.) Unaccounted for as she never told about them, but nor did she care to ask about her parents.

Strengths and Weaknesses: (Academic or otherwise. Can even be as simple as likes and dislikes.)

Strengths:
1. Fighting CQC (Close Quarter Combat)
2. Fighting from Mid-distance
3. Fighting Far-distance
4. Camouflage
5. Endurance
6. Crafting
7. Faking Emotions
8. Focus and Disciplined

Weakness:
1. Unable to emotionally connect
2. Trains more than socialize
3. Will not talk unless spoken to
4. Will see no point in making friends
5. May portray the wrong emotion at the wrong situation
6. Has no artistic skills

Other: Any Miscellaneous info you feel is important, but not covered.

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PostSubject: Re: Aoichi Enma   Tue Mar 04, 2014 4:48 am

As much as we do like pictures to help with looks, we would prefer if you'd also include a written version, since colors would not always be the same as the given picture.

So, before I recommend this, please but in some written details in 'Battle Attire' and 'Weapon Description'.

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PostSubject: Re: Aoichi Enma   Wed Mar 05, 2014 4:16 am

I hate to be a downer, but the things I brought up in chat weren't really addressed.

-Her semblance coupled with her physical prowess and fighting aptitude make her essentially too powerful against both Grimm and other humanoids. Looking at her strengths/weaknesses, all of her strengths far outshine her weaknesses.

-The reason for her being at Beacon is a little weak. Why would the organization Aoichi works for risk the liability of discovery by allowing one of their premier agents --and an assassin of all things--- to attend schooling that would have no benefit to them or Aoichi, herself? Would she still go on organization missions whilst her time at school? Don't you think that would raise suspicion?

-How is she a representation of Spartacus? The intense training to mold her into a perfect soldier, I can understand. But Spartacus was ultimately a rebel, whereas she is a dutiful soldier.

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PostSubject: Re: Aoichi Enma   Wed Mar 05, 2014 12:00 pm

I actually think she would better fit as an opposing force towards Beacon and the hunters. With her powers and training, it would be an interesting fight with say a team of fourth years. Even a fight with Glinda would be rather entertaining. She would seem more like a 'villian' of sorts than a student, if you ask me.

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PostSubject: Re: Aoichi Enma   Thu Mar 06, 2014 5:14 pm

How are the changes so far? I may not be done, but I like to know if I'm going in the right direction.

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PostSubject: Re: Aoichi Enma   Thu Mar 06, 2014 5:46 pm

The problems I have pointed out seem better now. But you may want to talk to Plix about any of her issues with the profile.

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PostSubject: Re: Aoichi Enma   Fri Mar 07, 2014 8:17 pm

Nitz is one of them too?

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PostSubject: Re: Aoichi Enma   Fri Mar 07, 2014 9:28 pm

Yes, Plix is a QA. So please talk to her, either on the chat or through PMs about any issues she has.

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PostSubject: Re: Aoichi Enma   Sat Mar 08, 2014 9:03 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Aoichi Enma   Sun Mar 09, 2014 11:00 pm

Where can she go?

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PostSubject: Re: Aoichi Enma   Mon Mar 10, 2014 4:23 am

just pm her

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PostSubject: Re: Aoichi Enma   Mon Mar 10, 2014 4:26 am

...I'll try.

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